I liked it i understood everything..
5/5

Wow wow wow; love it..

This was amazing. Everything flowed well. I love the way you write. You style is very simple but also powerful I love the emotions you used. Very nice. Shanik

I think the structure of the poem suited the piece perfectly, the flow worked very well and you incorperated your emotion into each stanza very beautifuly. Great job overall i enjoyed reading it =]