There's no Title for the Lost

I like the imagery that comes with poem. :) The title is very hooking; I think everyone comes to feel like this in their life.

My feelings are hitting
Like a rapid whirl wind
My teeth are gritting
To me, what I've done was sinned

*I like this. I would change the last line to "To me, wht I did was a sin". Just sounds a little better to me. But other than that I love the imagery*

I can't seem to get you off my mind
And now days begin to brew
Where everything else is left behind
As I speed off to catch you

*Good stanza. I feel like I'm reading a story and I'm waiting for the climax. Nice.*

Someday you'll be mine
My only, my beloved, my dear
And on that day everything will be fine
When we hold each other so very near

*I love how you change mood here. Very beautiful diction*

Now though the wind round me rolls
Whispering my passions for you
I'm caught in this thinkers pose
Trying to figure what should I do

*Good, I think changing the last line to "Trying to figure out what i should do" flows better.*

Then again maybe you'll never be mine
And in time I'll find
Things will never be fine
Just trying to get you off my mind

*I think it was clever togive the readers hope of her being yours then changing it in the ending. Very nice work. I love the style and the simple flow. Keep it up. Nik*

I like how you've written this from a more thoughtful point of view.. Many people have felt this way. It's cool to see how many different ways people can portray the same emotions through writing