"Screaming internally,
For someone to save me.
Being unwanted wasn't something I learned,
It came naturally. "

Great stanza. I love how you worded what you wanted to portray. Very unique.

This poem made me want to read more of your writing. Great job

5/5

This was great
Each line I read was filled with alot of emotions
Great Job!
5/5

This is beautiful m'love
x

With the break of dawn
I'm reminded why I've remained alone.
Staring at pictures of strangers
Once loved ones, now people I don't know.

i really liked this part. when i connect to something i'm really taken away by it and that's just what this stanza did. the over all poem is fabuous and i love it. great job!!! keep it up! 5/5. ~kim

"The doctor gave me a biopsy and with a red pen
He marked an X
On my heart, were it's diseased.
I wish someone would have saved me. "

this was super awesome. . . something like this is very rare....because this sort of thoughts dont usually come to mind...

beside that..very well written ..could feel the pain. . it hurts to miss someone caz youno longer talk to them...and when you think of them you can hardly remember their laughs...their tears....their silly smile..=(

keep up the good work ..:D