Your poem was so awesome!! I love it! I cried. Lol. Sorry. I am in a situation like this and i never knew how to write it down and its like you took the words that i wanted to say right out of my mouth. Great job. 5/5

Your a very talented writter and this poem showed that talent.

5/5

Great write. Simple, but deep and powerful. This is always a sad subject to write about. Even though the words were simple, I like it. I liked how everything flowed and meshed with each other. I understand how this feels like. And it sucks to feel like this. :/ But anyway. Great write, great read. 5/5.

I like the poem, i went trough the same thing before, i like the way you put it out how you expressed the way you feel, but anyways really good poem
c/b
Loka

This write needs a lot of metaphors and poetic senses..it seems more like someone expressing their love in thoughts.
I'm not good at love poems, but I think I know what a good love poem is..
Work on your rhyme and the imagery..poetry is not just about love.

Good luck
Keep it up :]

Great poem!

Aw...
I enjoyed reading this! :D
5/5!

Wow amazing i really love it
keep it up

Dear Mr. Terrible,

I have been reading around here searching for the poem that would go with what i feel now. Yeah, sometimes we thought that was it but we really can get through it. This is a very lovely poem. I loved it so much.

Melissa

I love your poetry and your choice of words. 5/5, Em

I don't know howw to describe how fantastic that was. You're an amazing writer. 5/5

I loved this piece, it speaks of true revelations and pure yearnings that any memory of your lover jsut sparks incessant pains and aches from the deep burrows of the heart. I'm sure most could relate, but what I liked most is the way you wrote it.

When you said we were over
I wished for a lie
^ ^ ^
This is my favourite line. I've been through that too and like the way you put it in simple yet meaningful words.

This is my favorite part. "Memories are fading
But my love is still strong
I crave for your touch
It's just been so long

I can still hear your voice
And the words that you said
I remember your giggle
How your cheeks got so red"
and i loved the part about taking it all for granted. that happens to easily. we have something or someone, and we never truly appreciate what they did for us, or even to us, and then they're gone. it's a real life lesson. great job getting the point across :)

Very nice written. You use alot of daily words but you make them sound so good together! I really loved this poem, you're very talented. But personally, I would change this part:
"Your smile was magic
Your eyes a deep blue
I took it for granted
Can't help but miss you"
in
"Your smile was like magic
Your eyes a deep blue
I took it for granted
I can't help but missing you"

But that's my opinion of course.
But I really thought u did a great job.

Keep writing poems!

Donjeta