I thought it was a fairly good poem but i think some of the wording of it made the flow a bit off. i also think your rhymes were a bit lazy (i do it too). I also like Rikki's idea of changing a twister of thoughts to twisted thoughts. i also agree with her that you should change the fourth stanza a bit.

This is an inciteful piece into ur mind. it holds ur attention and is to the point. u didnt beat around the bush i like that. and the fact the rythem n rhymes are not forced is wonderful!!
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Great write yet again, your flow is smooth and you have a nice rhythm in all your writes. I thought that at times it seemed like you had 'swallowed a thesaurus' .. do not try to rely on a thesaurus too much when you write, whether you do or not, thats just a tip for writing poetry. I dont have any criticism honestly with this one, you captured this so well, the many feelings of anxiety. One who actually goes through something can put together a truely amazing write cause they know how it feels, you can tell that with this write. It comes together so much better because you as a writer have a greater understanding of the topic.

Temps. [Beyond a Poets Mind]