I really like this poem, its interesting and well thought out =] Im supprised it hasnt gotten much more reviews yet.
The structure suited the piece and the flow was carried through very well, great job this poem is different to those i normally see on here, i found the idea very original 5/5

This poem is so true. it was more than jst one person to get things the way they are and still, we make it slanted. This is a really good poem. Ima favorite. 5/5

Nice flow and unique!

Hehe ^_^ 5/5

im strict.

Very good opening.

~tia

Very unique and interesting write 5/5