I love it how you took a cliche topic and made it into something that was unique and your own. Overall I like the style of writing you're using here but you should work on making the lines flow more freely.

"On nights when the stars come out to play,
I recall days that are long gone.
Memories that were blown away,
and moments kissed by the sun."

I think the flow in this first stanza would be better if you were to change if to be something like this

"On nights when stars come out to play
I recall days so long gone
Memories now blown away
Moments all kissed by Sun."

The second stanza for the most part flows pretty nicely but once again I think you'd benefit by rewording the lines to something like this.

"I remember summer's music,
the joy of yesterday too.
I still feel our winter's magic,
but yet I don't see you."

I won't go on with the rest of the stanzas, just giving you some input and examples of how to alter your writing a little. Good use of senses and and creativity