by Goth marionette May 20, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Forsaken in their arms, away, |
Beautifully dark! I loved the darkness in your words, these dark images were absolutely brilliant! And the form was different, and you definitely nailed it. Amazing work! |
by Fran
Atmospheric and chilling. Superb! |
by Sourav
Liked the darkness of the poem. Flow is good too. Well done! |
This was fairly lyrical |