Good raw emotion, it appeals much to people who can relate to losing someone and the mixture of pain and anger soon after.

Very raw emotions placed here, you state you hide behind a mask, but why hide who you really are? thats my question right there. Dont hide your pain, learn from it and move on. I consistantly use the fact of my suiside has a way to remind myself to keep my head in the game and drive on no matter what life throws at me. Use your pain to remind you that life is hard, but you can always, always overcome.

Awwh I liked this poem very much =]

Mainly the start, I love the way you did it, to show the side you see and the side you get. It's almost like a mirror reflecting only the good images, and hiding the bad. Love it =]

"Truth
Smile
Laughter
Love
You only know that side of me
Not this side
Lies
Tears
Pain
Hate
That haunt me behind the mask"

Very nice touch =]

5/5