Let your heart make the choice - something we should do at times but should also temper those choices with what our head is telling us. Sometimes the head is right. Well done.

This piece seems oh so familiar, I like the way you started and ended it with the title, it drives the point home.
Don't banish our beautiful life"
and leave me with strife
for my soul knows only you
living in this world for you"

this was my favorite phrase..very familiar indeed, Timothy r

Meena,

Most people who leave their spouse regret their decision after a while...sometimes it's not to late to turn the tide..but sometimes the one left behind finds a far better partner;)

Beautifully written and a strong plea...what man in his right mind could resist it?

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow this was strong...
i loved it! :D

Cute poem

Meena
What a sad heartfelt poem.

So before you say goodbye
and walk out the door
darling...think twice
let your heart make the choice

There is so much we would miss about the other person if someone leaves. So many times these things aren't thought about because this is done in a moment of anger when we aren't thinking of tomorrow.

Great job!
Love Cindy

What a beautifully written poem (hopefully not true)..
Only thing I have to say is punctuation and capital letters, other than that I thought it was well written, and very heartfelt.

Lonely
XxX

I like the line "my flowers in the garden will die".
I see you got your old fan-club. Maybe some new? I used to write for the encouragement of votes and praise, but I write mainly for me now. Don't get me wrong, nothing wrong with people praising you (or me for that matter), but it's just not as important.
Anyway, excellent poem.

Outstanding piece, so much to think before making such heartbreaking decision.

Look back through the years
of how we hold each other dear
a life without you is miserable
to walk away from me are you able

Loved this stanza above, could relate to it so very much.
Great write dear

all the best and take care