Brilliant poem--i dont know what else to say but this poem was amazing to read and im looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

5/5

Firstly I would like to comment on your excellent free flow which I believe I m better at recognizing than writing, As with all great poetry this one needs to be read more than once to receive its full depth.

Wow, you wrote this piece so well, I am not even kidding. You captured all that you wanted to say and made this poem come alive, and have the reader be a part of it. As Michael stated above, your free flow was amazing and your wording gave off such images and emotions, it set the scene perfectly for the reader. Excellent work, there was so much depth and feeling in this piece I thought. 5/5 from me, keep writing, you will get so far in life! Take care and God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Wow this one was amazing ^_^ loved the flow. Beautiful write, keep up the greatness!
-->Jess<--

This had good rhythm, flow, refrains all over...Usually I get stuck in non-rhyming verses and in times as such, I try to skip them by rhyming abab, the easy way...Still I need to master the skills... }:-) You have good collection here and much can be learnt from these verses...Thank you for your kind words on my writings...Greatly appreciated and hope you continue your great works...

Best regards,

RK

Another wonderfully written and flawless piece, 5/5. Em