Orphaned Nature (Musette)

by Lonely Rider   May 22, 2009


Orphaned Nature

Oh Spring!
just look around,
Lark sings.

Leaves sore
Daffodils smile
no more.

Ignored
nature's carcass
Implore.

*written for a club form challenge

**The Musette, created by Emily Romano is a poem that consists of three verses of three lines each. The first lines have two syllables; the second lines have four syllables, and the third lines have two syllables. The rhyme scheme is a/b/a for the first verse; c/d/c for the second verse, and e/f/e for the third verse. The title should reflect the poem's content

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  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Your poems always bring a smile. Your imagination and selection of words always amazes me. Your thoughts are always inspiring.
    You really should think of publishing your poems.

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    In my country we have an abundance of daffodils each Spring. They are planted along almost every road, along with other Spring flowers ( we have a name to uphold!) and it always saddens me so when they are no longer in bloom and start to wither away. I could feel that sadness within your words as well.

    Well done:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    you did wonderful on this club challenge :) I love the way you have done yours to the death of spring.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I think your poem compliments the form that you used. Well as spring is almost over, a new seasons awaits.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Raj, this is a good write using the form. I get the sense that Spring is almost over and summer is on the way. Well done.

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