by Izzy Hetzler May 22, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
'Daddy, daddy come and play' |
Great rhyming and word choice, truly describing what your father said. Your emotions were so real and deep, you did a wonderful job with this poem. It was sad to read this and I hope things got better. 5/5 from me, keep writing, always and forever... |