Bleeding Inside..

by xXHunnyGurlXx   May 23, 2009


Im just one person,
Alone in this world,
Im just one person,
A small unknown girl,
I hide from the world,
I run when Im scared,
Just answer me this,
Why was my life spared?
I always lie and
Ive never belonged,
My family left,
I used to be strong..
But once your alone,
Fending for yourself,
You wander around,
Like theres no one else,
You steal and you lie,
To get what you need,
But deep inside your,
Beginning to bleed..

**This poem i wrote by using my usual rhyming sequence, but i also, to make it different, made every line 5 syllables ..
Hope you enjoyed it. Comments will be greatly apreciated & i will be glad 2 return the favour.

Thanks.
*Hunny*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Hey kaylee-i think in ur little comment at the end u mean syllables arther than synonyms =P
    this is great-flows well-doesnt seem forced at all, nice rhyme throughout and the message is really sad-but really well portrayed.

    i absolutely love the last 4 lines-really great ending!

    5/5 rating from me =)

    aish
    xx