Very rarely do you come across a poem that is so elegantly composed which is full of passionate bursts , which makes one empathise with 'Jane' a beauty , treasure the poem for it is a very special kind of gold :)

I liked this. Wasn't my favorite but still a good poem. It's nice to see you write a rhyming poem. Those are always fun :). I liked that this poem had a story. It wasn't just one experience but more of an overview of someone's life. I like how well it flowed and also how controlled your emotions were. I love the imagery and the different ways you describe Jane. A very lovely piece indeed. I'd like to read more poems like this from you. Nik

I really really loved this poem cayce! It's lovely and I love how it managed to tell a story through simple short words, 5/5 from me.