Wow. The imagery and description are truly spectacular. I really want to say that this poem is about insomnia or paranoia. I can picture each and every stanza you wrote as a crystal clear image. This was intense emotionally and binds the reader to the end. If I had to make a complaint I would say that the ending was a bit abrupt and left me wanting a more detailed finish. However, this was a great write. 5/5 No doubt.

Hi Tim, Sunny is my roommate so I coulnt vote also, but nice work.. i`ll read more, i`m groovydude.. talk to you

Interesting write. Its been awhile since I read any of your work, May have to peruse more of it. Nice to see your heath condition didn't keep you from writing.

Tired of being alone in a crowded room
screaming at top volume for it to end
everyone moving in slow motion
pretending to be true friends

This verse is something I could releate to.
A moving write that is soaked in a well of
emotional sadness...take care.

Thank you for your comment on my write...

This piece is so emotional, filled with much pain and sorrow. The last stanza makes a powerful ending! Well done.

Damn, I'm sorry Tim, I couldnt vote on this one, Andreas my roomie and she already voted, so it wouldnt let me, but it truly deserves a 5...

Wow this is a very deep poem T,I see tha you have still got your creative flare!

Hmmmmm... interesting

I enjoyed the read very much, for me there was an overwhelming feeling of despair , Often we are alone even though there are people around, the worst kind of lonlieness. excellent job, thought provoking!

I've lost touch with my favorites...Lost touch with this site it seems. I'm here..reading your words...still in amazement...you were always great but maybe I didn't appreciate it time a thousand as I am today. Can I get some of that medication please? lol

No joking...nice write Mr. Timothy...seems even when you're surrounded you can feel the most alone you've ever felt. I enjoyed reading and will go on to read more! :)

Good to see you are still writing. I doubt you remember me because I have changed my name so many times, but like I said good to see you still writing :)