Eyes Never Dry

by Faithless   May 24, 2009


Sun shining morning
eclipse by gloomy weather
Sounds of thunder protest
against heaven's silence

Million silver driblets
crashing to the ground
Billions more await,
to share the same fate

Crippled of divine powers
to reverse the hands of clock
memories dive into a mental block

Piercing through a canvas
of crystalline blue
Stabbing in the center
of an open wound
it's now tainted
in crimson hue

your presence still lingers...

O pristine green pearl
forever laid hidden by closed shell
Alluring beauty forbidden to be seen;
cast by an oceanic spell

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  • 15 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I loved this. and especially this part "Piercing through a canvas
    of crystalline blue
    Stabbing in the center
    of an open wound
    it's now tainted
    in crimson hue"

    it's truly beautiful!!

    would you please give me your feedback on the last two poems i wrote? it would mean a lot.

  • 15 years ago

    by Macabre

    Alluring and creative use of metaphor. Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Macabre

    Alluring and creative use of metaphor. Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This is a really good poem. i love when people use metaphors.

    Million silver driblets
    crashing to the ground
    Billions more await,
    to share the same fate

    personally this was my favorite stanza. it made mme think of this time i was in an open field watching a meteor shower.

    this poem is very well written. great job. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Absolutely incredible! I love it! The imagery is wonderfully constructed. I honestly cannot give any criticism on it. Well done!

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