Bullies

Wow... this poem is so sad and deep... sooo emotional... I love it... The ending was extremely powerful... It's very relatable as well... Well done Kurt!

This was enjoyful to read. Yet also a sad read. Knowing what it's like to feel hatred when you see your reflection it dissappoints the person on the outside and also the one within. Love your poetry. Keep writing many more.

xo

Deep. I like the transitions; how each stanza brings in a new darkness. This is a very personal poem - I don't know if it's true for you or not, but it rings true with such specific details and raw emotion. By the end, I'm still left slightly in the dark as to what terrible things occurred. Perhaps that's what you were going for? There's definitely a question left unanswered. Also, the last stanza gave me a mixed vibe (in a good way). Perhaps this poem is about an individual that can't look themselves in the mirror after a dark past. OR, two family members that shared a dark past and one member now avoids the other because the other's presence is a reminder of what has happened. I was reminded of how sometimes when parent's lose a child, they separate because being around each other makes the pain of loss more real. Anyway, as you can see, your poem made me think, and made me question, so, in that, it's a great write.
Good work.

Wow this is in intense. the emotion is so raw, and it draws a tear to my eye. very well written piece, you should be proud of this great ability you have...to make paint a picture with your words. keep it up :]

5/5

This captures the feeling of dread so well, it conveys directly and fully to the reader, and I know that's our aim as poets at the end of the day.
I understand how someone can "hate their own reflection" and I also realize how this affects their relationships as well.
Great read.