by FlawlesslyTarnished May 24, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I carved your pretty words, deep inside my heart |
by Maria
I can relate to this, and I'm sure many other men/women can as well. I don't see anything new here, this topic is often written about, but it is definitely understandable as to why. We're a bunch of fools for love, but don't let that ruin your idea of it. |
I really like this poem, it's so real. 5/5 |
by Aussie
I've noticed that you have largly imporve. amazing work:) |
Wow let me just start by saying this poem was amazing! I added it to my favorites the second I finished reading it. You have a real talent. I don't think anything was wrong with the flow, it flowed pretty good. Im sorry that you're feeling depressed and from reading this I can relate to you and trust me if he's putting you through this pain he isn't worth. |
I feel this is a lyrical ode to the way our unstable actions effect many like the domino effect I also felt the rhythm was excellent I understood that it was one reaction that you were focused on and wish you luck in standing all the dominoes back up |