by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden May 25, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A legacy of lies parade down the promenade |
by Madison
Absolutly amazing |
by Andrew
Nice poem, brilliant wording and use of vocabulary. The flow is good, rhymes flow but fixed in some places e.g. Banish your dark "duplicity".. I think duplicity just fitted as a rhyme. The title is well thought of and i categorically liked the part "i cultivated the cut off of your perverted placement, in my misrepresented life of being your basement. Good poem. |