Night Sky(Musette)

by Dreamofolwin   May 25, 2009


Stars fill
The night sky
So still

I gaze
As they sparkle
Amaze

It feels
So enchanting
Unreal

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  • 15 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... this is a really short but wonderful poem. I like it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very nicely written. I love to look up at the stars too. :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful write...
    lovely imagery ...
    loved the night sky that you have painted with your words...

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Its so beautiful Olwin. Such simple poem but rarely people write abt the beauty of night. Superb indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Stars fill
    The night sky
    So still

    I gaze
    As they sparkle
    Amaze - This is a forced rhyme.

    It seems
    So enchanting
    Unreal

    It would be helpful to add a description of the form at the end so those who are not familiar with the form can see what rules you were adhering to.