You are becoming quite the writer. Another good job with the Tetractys form. Your words portray vivid images of a person, the drunkard and the sadness in their feelings. Well done.

Great job on this form Olwin :)
Take care
Cindy

Wow, this is unique, very unique indeed.
Great write.

all the best and take care

You';ve said so much in a few lines. Nicely done - it's almost like a haiku, but without the syllable count! :-)