Broken Heart

Sylvia, you have penned for us something thats very very real and true..the pain of a broken heart ...and expressed to us in a such short and amazing write of exactly how it feels. Its an amazing poem.. so well penned. I loved it.

Olwin.

Chest hurts, cannot breathe,
tears fall from your eyes.

This opening stanza say it so well about a broken heart after a love dies.I've experienced these words and does not wish it on my worst enemy.But we cannot blame the heart or prevent it from falling in love.
What seem to be the killer, in these situation is time.When will the emotional pain go away?
When will we be able to move on?It is indeed a painful experience.
You have captured the essence of such e motions very well in this sad yet beautifully penned piece.
I've enjoyed reading it.
Paul...

The raw pain is so evident in this write. and yet, love is a chance that we all take, time and again.

peace and hope to you, dear friend
shobhana

Yes, thats exactly what happens and thats the question that comes in mind but it takes time to realize the way it goes.
Very nicely presented.

all the best and take care

Well yes love is a chance we take, but most times this chance merits to be taken. It's a long time i havn't commented your poems, i will catch up on them tomorrow, kel.