All Because of You

Short poems are good though IMO they should still contain rhythm.. Try to have a structured flow when you write. Other than that, All I have to say is great job

This was really good.. the only suggestion i could make would be to have a third verse, ending and starting with the same ones but with one in the middle- maybe clear up a question or two, like was it your father who cheated on your mother, or some other important detail like that. if you keep it the way it is though, its very universal in its ideas, and wonderfully written!
~Claire

Wow. I loved it. Short but to the point. Rhymes were good. The flow was excellent. The words just rolled right off my tongue. It was sad.. and relatable. The kind of poem people tend to always like. Good job. :]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Sleepless nights
Useless fights
All because of you
What you did
Oh god forbid
That it can be true

*I can relate to this feeling. You get so upset that you can't function. Nice*

You cheated and lied
For that we cried
What else could we do
This family you see
Can no longer be
All because of you

*I like how you changed from anger to sadness. Very nice. I love the flw and the short stanza, Keep it up. Nik*

A short poem. Straight to the point, with superb flow and ryhthym. This was wonderfully written, sad and because of it's length and the way you divided each line it seemed that I could even see the anger. 5/5