This was an exceptionally well written poem. Straight forward, expressing something many of us today feel, and thus can relate to. This is a great poem, you have a really great way with words. I especially love how you just spelled it out, something different from the exotic metaphors of usual poems. 5/5 Absolutely excellent.

For what lies within her,
is a sadness that consumes,
it eats her lost heart away,
like taking the sun from June.

*This waa my favorite stanza. I can relate to this poem and I love how you tell your story. You weren't afraid to tell us all of the sad details...I admire that. This was such an emotional piece. Very nice work. Nik*