Wow This was an awesome poem and the flow and rhyme was really good. You have the reader wondering the entire poem and it makes it really good. The emotion in this poem is really good as well. You did a great job with this poem even though it wasn't long. Good job.

This was a wonderfully written poem. With a great flow, and your use of first person made it different, let it stand out. You portrayed feeliong very well, and the rhyming seemed natural, the words fitting in together wonderfully. 5/5

"I wish I could write this poem to have a happy ending, but it wouldn't be true
cause love only exists in fairy tales, but that's just between me and you". I like this unuasual way of writing a poem. As i read through it, i like the feelings it gives.
Well love is like a religion, you can take it or leave it. You don't have to believe it, but i can tell you that real, pure, true love exist because that what i have experience since 12 years, or maybe my story is just a fairy tales also. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

I liked this. I felt like you were sitting in a chair just telling us all about your life and it's stuggles. I like how simple the flow was. All of your emotions were clearly expressed which made it easier to understand and relate to. Nice work. Shanik

I can really feel the emotion in this poem as if it was written after a fresh wound. I reminds me of my own disappointments in love and the sudden crash that often comes with falling into trap cupid has set

Perfect ending :-(

I liked the complexity in the poem. When I said complexity I wasn't talking about the flow, structure or usage of words. I was referring to the first line addressed to everyone then getting into specific person then turned out to be a lover. It was somehow dramatic which I feel is needed in order for a writer to express fully what's in their minds. I’ve read some of your poems in the past and this is yet another amazing piece from you...

I really liked this one... the flow of it kept me wanting to read more... the ending was awesome, it tied the whole poem together... another great piece!

My favorite line is the last one... lol I'll probably have it written on my hand for weeks on end *smile*