Wow... Another strong one... Excellent descriptions...

"The glass shatters across the floor,
Feet shuffling covers glistening panels more,
Crimson red magnified by dread,
And yet despite lapses of color, its in no one's head."
--> I like this. Good start!

"Gunshot, bullet echoes through the night
Yet no one's heart shakes in fright.
Help them or save them scream their pleas.
Yet no one cares at all tonight."
--> I don't really get the first line... Doesn't the gunshot echo instead of the bullet? I like the rhymings here though.

"Blood splattered on a crystal clear surface,
Crystal clear image, events in rapid place.
Soles of feet carrying glass and cuts
Yet no one thinks, ignoring skewered guts."
--> There's the strong imagery again. Good use of vocab.

"Brain blown, splattered upon the wall,
Always tried to stand so tall.
Will they care, will they not?
Am I important enough, worth a thought."
--> Excellent ending! :)

5/5
Good Work! :)

This poem was absolutely phenomenal.
You did a very good job!

I like the last few lines. I think you ended it very well.

I'm going to remember this poem for a while to come.

;)
5/5, well deserved dear.
-me