by Colby
You know, I was really expecting to be disappointed with the forum topic I made. I figured I would get all the generic, cliche poems dying to blindly praised. But this one IS different. This poem is really great, first one I've read in a long time that I could actually read word for word, and could really relate too, and feel. The flow is fantastic, and the way it is set up is interesting. (the pauses and all). All in all, I really enjoyed reading this, and hope (although doubt) that more poems like this surface, because it is super stellar! |
by ether
For starters there is one thing I think you need to fix up: |