Secret Memories..

by xXHunnyGurlXx   May 26, 2009


Hush, keep quiet,
No ones to know,
This place so secret,
Is ours alone,
The snow so soft,
Beneath our feet,
These are where memories,
Began to meet,
The knot was tied,
Right here on this spot,
You may not remember,
But I never forgot..
You clasped my hand,
Within your palm,
You asked me out,
You seemed so calm,
I swore we'd last forever,
& I still believe we will,
The world is endlessly spinning,
But to me it seems so still...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    This is really sweet =)
    the only criticism i have is the syllable count in the lines:
    I swore we would last forever,
    I still believe we will,

    however its nothing major and the poem is fntastic.

    great structure, great story.

    5/5

    xx