'I want to die
I love being alive'
`This was kind of contridictory dont you think? You want to die, yet you like being alive? Doesnt make sense, youd have to lean one way or the other.. lol..

"LSD" - I guess I really didnt get your acranom [sp?] here.. ?

Other than that, great flow .. quite impressive actually.. again clearly we see your emotions and feelings.. to have the reader feel something is a strength in poetry in my opinion.

Good job -
Temps [Beyond a Poets Mind]

LSD is a hallucinogenic drug also known as acid, hence the contradictions. It's as if I don't understand what I actually feel myself, because I don't know which reality I like better -- Real life or an imaginary world.