Division

Tears of insanity
Smiles full of wickedness
A soul that fights with the heart
A mind overwhelmed and lost

* I really like this. The words you use or perfect and make me want to keep reading. I love the imagery as well*

The path is divided
I divide
Searching
Willing life to happen

*Nice change in syntax. I think it's very interestig*

Show its multi-sided face
To eyes who refuse to look
Unable to bear the reflection
Of truth

*This is a very deep poem and it evokes thoughts from the reader. Very nice imagery and strong diction. Nice work. Nik*