Yeah i know what you mean. i myself wasnt sure whether or not to keep it. i think it was more of a way to just end it

I really enjoyed reading this and loved the rhyming sequence and how your words flowed together so well

5/5

Awww! This is so sweet, and yes you are also a good poet.... this is a piece,of your inner thoughts, sad, yet ends in happiness.
Good Job 5/5

Thank you for reading my words and commenting