Wow...this was such a powerful poem. I love the flow and how it works with your diction to form a beautiful poem. Very nice work. Shanik

Oh wow kyle this was amazing. just like all ur poems here. n i can relate to this. cuz thatz how i felt with mi chicko but it's wasnt so much pain. bubbles i love the ending. yesh be patient n be that friend for her. i'm glad u r riting once again i missed it =]

love ya,
Frenchy