by Aish May 27, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He entered the room and stood there staring, |
This poem was simply... wonderful. |
by Lady Nik
:( That made me so sad. I'm literally holding back tears. I've never read something so powerful and emotional. Wow...this was so good. I love the detail and the use of dialouge. I love how you make your poems like stories. You have such a talent and I hope one day I'll be able to write like you. Very good work. Nik |
by Saving Grace
Wow. like. wow. Soooo powerful and intense. verry sad. I duno what to say. Its just so moving. But like the comment above, it is so common today. Not rare, unfortunatly. But youve done an excellent job here very well done. I also think that in a way, alot of people will relate. I enjoyed this write, although it was so sad. Keep it up. 5/5 xx |
This was a moving write. Sad, and yet makes so much sense in the world we live in today. Though the rhyming here didn't completely work, the words were so compelling despite the slight lack of flow it kept me reading. |