This was a moving write. Sad, and yet makes so much sense in the world we live in today. Though the rhyming here didn't completely work, the words were so compelling despite the slight lack of flow it kept me reading.

'He tucked the note in his pocket, moved back to the bed,
his daughter in his arms he whispered in her ear.
"I'll find him honey, If its the last thing i do!"
And from his face to her cheek fell one last lonely tear.'

^This stanza was by far my favourite. A different ending to much suicide poems, a thirst for vengeance. Greatly written. 4.5/5

Wow. like. wow. Soooo powerful and intense. verry sad. I duno what to say. Its just so moving. But like the comment above, it is so common today. Not rare, unfortunatly. But youve done an excellent job here very well done. I also think that in a way, alot of people will relate. I enjoyed this write, although it was so sad. Keep it up. 5/5 xx

:( That made me so sad. I'm literally holding back tears. I've never read something so powerful and emotional. Wow...this was so good. I love the detail and the use of dialouge. I love how you make your poems like stories. You have such a talent and I hope one day I'll be able to write like you. Very good work. Nik

This poem was simply... wonderful.

It had a very good story behind it, a father seeking revenge for his daughter..
love it.

& yes this is a very common topic for poetry but how youve worded it make it sound different from others.

Some of the rhyming was off in some stanzas tho i will add. But other then that it had great understanding..

Well done.
*Hunny*