Michael,

I love the wording in this. Beautiful poetic language:) It is about you, isn't it? *bright smile*

I think lustre would do nicely too instead of dance..but that's personal:)

(((hugs))) xx

5/5 Ingrid

Darcy, this is a marvelous write! I wish I had the ability to write something like this.. definatly far from a cliche or plain haiku, youve out done yourself here.. I loved this one because it made you think a little, and it was interesting to interpret it.

Great job (:
5/5.

Temps!

Well done again. Rugged rock, could be a man or a rock. Face slips, the water washes the rock clean or the man's face falters to reveal himself, the jewel in the crown. Either way man or rock, you did a very good job with this.

Lovely haiku there... beautiful words :)

Michael
You did a wonderful job on this Haiku :)

(((Hugs)))
Cindy

Haiku's are fun. I think you had a fun time writing this because it shows. This is a really beautiful piece. Very lovely wording. Keep it up. Nik