Wow baby this so deep i feel yo pain

This poem is written in a really interesting way. Is the devil supposed to be someone close to tht hurut u? Thts the type of vibe i go frorm tht. i love this poem as well keep up the good work

This poem is written in a really interesting way. Is the devil supposed to be someone close to tht hurut u? Thts the type of vibe i go frorm tht. i love this poem as well keep up the good work

Your repitition of 'No time no love for you.' was powerful, not overused and repeated in a fashion that it was effective and added to your poetry. This would absolutely be a beautiful song. You have great flow and a great way with words. Another great piece. 5/5 A very blessed poet.

"I'm waiting for what, I don't know.
I'm breathing cause my lungs won't let me go."

The start itself blew me off. Very well composed. . the flow was perfect. . .felt good reading it...

talent shows...^^,

This is very lyrical and i feel the emotion quite well