I really like this one, you can tell it comes from the soul. thanks for your input on mine (:

Wow, I really liked this!! I loved the second stanza. The first two lines are amazing. I can really relate to the 5th stanza. Reminds me of a guy I like... :P And the ending was really great. I felt the pain and sadness in this poem. You did an amazing job on this one, Shanik! Keep it up :]

That would be a good song.. but very interesting and amazing choice of words and flow.5/5