Want VS Need

by Beautiful Forever   May 28, 2009


Take your time - I can wait,
Slow, smooth, handle with care,
Speed up now - I want to date,
Ten more seconds to get there,

I can't let go - my only one,
Give me some space to fly,
Love is amazing - it's too fun,
I'm so suffocated I could die,

Talk to me - a voice so sweet,
I love your whispers in my ear,
Quiet now - try to be discrete,
I just want time to lay here,

Shining brightly - a nice ring,
I never seemed to notice before,
It was nothing - just a fling,
Our lives have become much more...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    This poem had a great flow to it-very easy to read and the a-b-a-b rhyming pattern was appropriate and worked well.

    nice story as well-subtle yet evident.

    5/5

    aish
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