by xXxemzxXx May 28, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The anger escapes, |
Again, bland and unimaginative, with zero direction or purpose. |
by Kimberley
Amazing. Extremely well written with a very relatable topic. There's nothing wrong with the ryhming and format. It's basically a 'perfect' poemm in my eyes. i love it. keep it up. 5/5. ~KM~ |
by The Queen
I agree, this poem was full of sadness and anger but expressed in a way that the readers would follow easily. The emotions were expressed continuously all throughout the poem. |
Aww i really like this poem i can really feel it, it flows so nicely but once again is very sad. |
The dark emotion is expressed well in the poem and my hope is that the escape you write of is also escape from abuse. If this is not possible for some I prefer honesty |