Omg, this made me on the verg of tears... its so sad... you want her there but she could never be... but you have the hope that one day that she will be there... holding your hand... its reali is nice... lolz... *tears*

Margii
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This is sweet. I wish more guys felt this way about girls, the world would be a better place. once again, great poem. keep it up!

5/5 :]

So emotional poem , it's really good job which deserves alot of rates & comments . i like the way u express how much u want her & this is a great feeling .
plz keep it up 5/5
Siham

I really like this poem. :) made me think of someone.
5/5 :] great job and keep it up!

WOW!!! this is so sweet but sad at the same time..
I really like this poem.. its so true and explains what im going throw right now.
keep up the good work :)
>>Dominique<<

I hate this feeling. This poem is absolutely beautiful and you do a very nice job of expressing yourself! Great write :)

I love this poem great job :)