Will you pacify?

The word is QUENCH. Quence is merely a rare surname. (correct me if there's some other usage that escapes me). And words like 'crimson' are absolute cliches and must be avoided unless you're trying to create some sort of an irony (like making a reference to a cliche by using one).

I guess I liked your other piece better though I have to admit that it's difficult to write structured poetry.

Nice write... form is very different and interesting. Well done!

Raj,
I love the power behind the use of the all capital letters line. It brings to light the importance of the rain and the need for it to quench the heat. Such a demanding verse you have penned and a beautiful one as well. Well done.
5/5
Take Care,
Kay

Beautifully written, unique form, great write indeed.

all the best and take care

Raj
It doesn't matter what you write your words always touch the readers.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy