I love the line "my nightmare stained tears" tht was really amazing. This poem is really good. I feel the pain and it hurts. Good job :)

Well it was an alright poem. But the flow needs a lot of work.

I think to improve the flow you should change some words.

example:
Wounds forever reopening
When will they heal?

=Wounds will never fade,
When will they heal?

Also another suggestion is... to use punctuations.

It will help the flow.

Example.

It never ends,
This pain I feel...
- as you can see it improves the flow and it shows the reader more emotions.

Omg so much emotion and tenseness in the poem it has u waiting to see wat comes next i loved it its like u reach out ur heart for ur viewers to see its amazing

Wow... i just... wow. The last line was beautiful. I can really feel the pain speaking in your words. It almost radiaes hurt. I can relate (not exactly, no one ever can) but I sorta understand this. It's beautiful and has a lovely flow to it that really connects to the audience. Bravo! 5/5.

Gr8 one again keep rockin ;)

This is deeply depressing. I can truly say I've been in this same position before. To fall in love then to be duped. It's a hard thing to overcome. Silence often is a deadly enemy. It can allow us to fill our heads with thoughts. Thoughts of dying or killing ourselves. Pain engulfs us in tides. We put aside all other loves. Just to dwell on this singular one. Heartache causes a destitution of feeling. Many sleepless nights. Dreading the morning lights. I recall one quote of mine "Dire consequences make life horrid, While the sweetest of consequences can cause pain often enough as well."
Beautiful poem.
Bravo.
*applauds*
5/5

-Lilium

Pretty awsome