He Loves Me...Not

by Lady Nik   May 29, 2009


I love you
I'm just another boy without you
I need you baby
I'll never leave
Wish I could kiss you
I really missed you.
Not.

You're beautiful
I love it when you laugh
Your smile is amazing.
I love your poetry
Can't wait to be with you forever
Will you marry me?
Not.

You make me happy
I'm so glad you're mine.
I love you, my wife
I dreamt of you
I can't stop thinking about you
I'm madly in love with you.
Not.

I believed
I trusted
I wanted
I miss
I need
I love
You.

*Alot of people are having a hard time understanding this poem. The first three stanza's are what the guy is saying to me. I say the word "not" to show that he was lying. The last l stanza shows ho I feel about the boy, that's why I don't say "not". I hope that helps. Nik*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Also-you switch tenses in the 1st stanza present to past and in last stanza too-although this might be deliberate-just checking =P

  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    I havent made up my mind about this one-its from the husbands perspective yes?
    interesting structure, nice use of "not" however maybe u could add in a final "not" after the You in the last stanza?????

    im not sure-but its really good-just-i dont know-i think cos its an unconventional style it's thrown me a little-but not in a bad way at all...

    4.5/5 for this one (rounded up of course)

    aish
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Hmm well... the flow is a little off because of the constant use of I's.

    Though I think it's a really sad poem.

    Anyway the structure is a little unique. I think to improve this poem you should explain why you said some things in the poem. (Example) why you believed in her etc.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is really well written. I love the style and how u make all his words like lies good job. Really loved it

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