This poem is really well written. I love the style and how u make all his words like lies good job. Really loved it

Hmm well... the flow is a little off because of the constant use of I's.

Though I think it's a really sad poem.

Anyway the structure is a little unique. I think to improve this poem you should explain why you said some things in the poem. (Example) why you believed in her etc.

I havent made up my mind about this one-its from the husbands perspective yes?
interesting structure, nice use of "not" however maybe u could add in a final "not" after the You in the last stanza?????

im not sure-but its really good-just-i dont know-i think cos its an unconventional style it's thrown me a little-but not in a bad way at all...

4.5/5 for this one (rounded up of course)

aish
xx

Also-you switch tenses in the 1st stanza present to past and in last stanza too-although this might be deliberate-just checking =P