I can fell ur happpyness cause ur visiting u r frien and then i can feel ur saddness and pain cause hes gone. im sorry for ur loss. This poeme is really good. I loved the rhyming and it flowed real nice. Keep up the good work.

Excellent rhyming Grant:)

When you say it out loud it almost sounds like a song and I believe when a song would be made from this, it would be a nr. one hit:)

About the question in your poem, if he sees you: he does. I am able to see people who are no longer alive, so I know for a fact they are still among us.

I am very certain you derive great comfort and inner peace from these visits, it is a great way to balance your daily life and your inner world. Some people/ memories deserve to be kept close to us, to keep us strong and aware of our roots:)

Great poem, Grant, well worth the wait.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Great poem..it must be hard for you but at least your turning sadness into a memoral/poem for your friend. thats amazing..

This poem started out weird and then took shape by the second stanza. It's done in a different style than i'm used to seeing your poems still a really great poem.

5/5

You can tell he was a good friend to you and you to him. I only wish that I had such a friend to salute in life and in death. Very well written.

This gives me goosebumps and brings tears to my eyes.. what a touching write. Literally leaves me speechless.. JP is lucky to have a friend like you.

5/5. Temps.

Grant,

This is such a sad poem and a reminder of how dangerous motorbikes can be, or should I say, how vulnerable you bikers are by 'us' car drivers who often pay little attention to bikes.
The flow, rhyme and emotion here are as usual great. Your poems are always a pleasure to read.

Take care

Michael

This is indeed an exceptional write... that just touches the heart. It left me feeling those goosebumps.. (not poems do, lol ), and a tear in my eye. It is a most beautiful tribute to your dear friend.. and I love how your poem has a touch of sadness..yet happy reminisce in it. You did amazing on what must have been a hard write in memory of such a good friend who died in this way, LOL

Take care.
Olwin.

Touching and so well written..

It's really hard to miss a friend... I can relate to you for my friends are far from me right now. Beautiful poem indeed!!! Good job! God bless you always!!!

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