"Your best kept secret
Your biggest regret
Every truth I told
You'll strangle in their nets."
Very nice flow here,capturing my interest with the last line
"You'll strangle in their nets". Seems to be a paradox of a truth net verses a tangled web
"It's been 3 months
Since I last cried,
Not from lack of reason
It just seems they're all dry. "
Dry tears leaves my own imagination to wonder if this is a metaphor for suppressed emotion
"This past year
It's been the worst
An innocent girl
With a terrible curse"
Specific time line gives the poem realism as if reflecting an actual experience
"And all these problems
I'm terrified to fix,
What if I'm really this crazy
when every things perfect?"
"I try to live right,
But everything goes wrong
I'm as honest as you want
But you don't like what your told"
The last line reminds me of the famous Jack Nickelson line The truth! You can’t handle the truth!
Overall I believe I know where you are coming from and it seems that everything’s not perfect in this relationship.
No one Loves the Honest One, Confused would be more appropriate
Maybe it is just me but this poem just does not seem to read easy perhaps that is the way it is meant to be, yet I think with a little more effort this could be a poem that would appeal to the majority
e.g.
1st stanza
Every truth I told
You'll strangle in their nets
Just does not sound right to me,
They'll perhaps
2nd stanza
It just seems they're all dry
they've all dried perhaps
Last stanza
last 2 lines just don't feel or read right?
Let us know what you think or if these comments have been of help. I will score it after you edit it again. Rays