Indeed a great poem, my favorite line being
"acting out each scenario
covertly
within the confines of my mind-
where no man dares to stumble,
even you in your tattered soul'
you have a way with your words, letting the confines of my mind to wander aimlessly, great write , Timothy r

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As I have mentioned before, I just like to
read your poems for its like hearing you
speak to the reader...good write!

"who needs polite coffee cups anyway,"

I really like that line for some reason. Don't get me wrong the entire piece is awesome, but that line just stands out to me.
Keep it up, Holly