Great word choice, absolutely perfect! =]

The ryme and flow of this piece was very nice, I had to read it over 3 times!

In a way I can see this being turned into a kids story, nevertheless it is a great piece!

keep up the good work!

5/5

HvN

I love the words and poetry pattern you used here to even make orange picking seem glamorous
I feel this was very well written

Great poem amazing i loved it the flow was good and i honestly enjoyed reading this poem it was great simple topic but you make it unbelieveably interesting 5/5 you are a great writer

Great poem amazing i loved it the flow was good and i honestly enjoyed reading this poem it was great simple topic but you make it unbelieveably interesting 5/5 you are a great writer

This is different to the poetry I normally choose to read but I must say I reallyenjoyed it, the structure you used was perfectly suited to the piece and your chioce of wording was great =]
Great job - oh and nice consistant flow used too!