It feels sooo much like a short story to me Deana or at least part of a bigger story anyway. You left me wanting to know more and read more, I think it could definetely be expanded. Nice work.

This is achingly beautiful! I wonder how come you never got comments for this. I wish I were in my constructive criticism suit, I would've given you more important feedback, but for now I will have to settle for my emotional "review"

He was too young
to be so alone
and scared
to be a danger
to society
Or was he?

I could totally visualize this - sitting in a dim cafe, almost empty, and the misery on his face.

and GOSH, I just love the ending. Such resignation and despair; that's what I felt, anyway. Hope I wasn't too off =D

Great job!

Very poignant. I really enjoy poems that take a passing moment or every day scene and scratch beneath the surface. You are a perceptive writer.

This is written so well that it seems like a real life experience. good job 5/5